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Dark Poetry #1

Someday

BoyToy
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-10-04 01:28 AM

Look into my eyes, and you will see
a darkness, a void inside me.
Worry not, its not to deep,
sometimes it's filled, but only when I sleep.

Everyday I pray for you, to fill that hole,
make me smile, open my soul.
Where are you, my Queen of hearts?
why aren't you here, why are we apart?

Someday God will deliver you,
in my hour of need.
He will grant me your grace,
and I will be freed.

I love you, with all my body,
all my mind, and all my heart.
Soon my dear we shall never again,
be apart

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A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-04 03:20 AM

Nice job, boy toy,
I can empathise with being away from one you love. You convey your longing well.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.

Tisha
Junior Member

since 1999-09-11

Posts 12
Weedsport, NY

2 posted 1999-10-04 08:52 AM

For my Love, tears of joy fell upon my face. I long to be with you, your words, your whisper, our Faith gets us through these last ,yet very painful days. Once safely in your arms we will rest. I love you with everything my soul possesses and every beat of my heart goes out to you. Thank you for such a lovely and thoughtful gift. love you always, Tisha

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-10-04 10:03 AM

Your work is getting better and better!!!
I throughly enjoyed this..

Jenny

Tammy
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 90

4 posted 1999-10-04 10:03 AM

Boy,
Very beautifully written... You definatly have talent... Keep up the good work...
Tammy

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