Dark Poetry #1 |
Waiting |
songwater Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32Marietta,Ga. |
To wait for a sun that does not shine. To wait for a poem that doe's not rhyme. To wait for the battle to win the war. To wait all alone behind closed doors. To pray the prayer to end this run. To pray to a God who does not come. ? |
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Tony Di Bart Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 160Toronto, Canada |
I like it. Very simple, very easy to understand. Thanks see ya |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Song~ this was very sad. I liked it though.-SEA |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i could certainly relate to this. i spent too many years waiting. i learned that you cannot wait for things to happen. the opportunities are there, even if hidden well in the shadows. you must be the one to reach out and sieze them. anyway, i enjoyed the read. well done. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
I agree with danni. Go out and make things happen. You can not always rely on Fate to do things for you. The chances are there just have to find them. Gread Post The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Some days the sun DOES shine Some days poems DO rhyme Battles are no fun but some we WIN OPEN the door for the sun to come in KEEP ON PRAYING, not to end the run, But to be able to reach out and touch the sun. GOD IS THERE and HE LOVES YOU! God bless you all. :-) -debbie- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
SongWater, I see we pray to the same God. Short and good, to the point... Joel. |
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