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Dark Usagi
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since 2000-04-10
Posts 18
Oviedo, FL, USA

0 posted 2000-04-10 05:53 PM



My mind wonders to the moon, stars and beyond

Flying deep within my soul

Loving my true hero, seeing his gallent soul

Looking beyond the true meaning of life

Simplifying aspects of the mind

Unsolving mysterys of the universe

Speaking the true memory of pain

Teaching griffins and dragons to fly

Showing the unicorn where and why she has a horn

Holding the secret to humanity in my arms

Discovering the velvet sky

Freeing tormented souls

But most of all speaking the heart of a dark poet


 

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-04-10 05:55 PM


DU~ this is beautiful!! -SEA
JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-04-10 05:56 PM


You can speak the heart of a dark poet here anytime.  Welcome to Dark Passions Dark Usagi. Great first post.  

Joy

Broken
Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271
The woods
3 posted 2000-04-10 07:39 PM


Great first post! Welcome to Dark passions, can't wait to read more. Yours truly ~Broken  
TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
4 posted 2000-04-10 10:38 PM


Welcome! Hope you like it here at passions...

 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
5 posted 2000-04-10 10:39 PM


You stole my dancing dot!!!

 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-04-11 09:08 AM


D.U~
This was so soulful and softly said~
Just Beautiful~
Tracie~


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-04-11 09:43 AM


"Teaching griffins and dragons to fly"

Could you teach a wolf to fly?
I need some wings right about now. haha
very good, and my welcome also, I will enjoy your visit.
Joel.

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
8 posted 2000-04-12 12:27 PM


welcome to passions...
good poem...
see you around...

 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

9 posted 2000-04-12 08:13 AM


Welcome! This is fantastic! Keep writing....

 Kathleen


dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

10 posted 2000-04-12 11:49 AM


Welcome, awsome post!!

"Holding the secret to humanity in my arms"


    Care to clue me in???  I am lost on that one


Great work

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

11 posted 2000-04-12 12:03 PM


From the "dark poetess" to the Dark poet DU...
I truly enjoyed every word of this...
awaiting more...


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster



ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

12 posted 2000-04-12 04:53 PM


Welcome to DP!!  You're first post was great...although, I'd have to agree with dhuron...could you clue us in on these secrets of your's.  Well great job (again) and welcome (again)!  (I have a knack for repeating myself don't I?)

 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

13 posted 2000-04-12 07:22 PM


Hey.  smiles evilly Konnichiwa, Jessie.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
14 posted 2000-04-12 09:47 PM


Beautiful thoughts and dreams, we writers can have many worlds only a penstroke away.
Loved this  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



TanAngel
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA
15 posted 2000-04-12 10:01 PM


Dark Dreamer! There is only one me thank-u!!!! I do know this person though... grin very well in fact... I am surprised in you! Oh well...

 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

16 posted 2000-04-13 04:22 PM


I loved this, it was excellent, good images...hope you got more, i'm sure you do....i'll be back for more...much love, one love, PEACE
Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

17 posted 2000-04-14 07:25 AM


True darkness comes from the soul as does this poem it just arrives one day and takes you for its own there is no release and no escape

  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

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