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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
If I had a magic wand one that would make you love me much as I do you would I use it? One that would make you look at me as I look at you, with a unbridled love. would I use it? One that would open up your heart as mine is to receive my love as I’m ready to receive yours. Would I use it? One that would maybe let you feel my heart pounding in my chest when we are together. Would I use it? One that would make you feel the terrible loss and loneliness I feel when you are gone. Would I use it? One that would make you feel my undying love and devotion, in turn make you the same way. Would I use it? One that let’s you cry horribly when your alone, gut wrenching sobs knowing, you don’t want anything to do with me anymore. Would I use it? No. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Joel~ on such a beautiful day, making me cry wasn't nice!  Loved this poem.-SEA |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
When I was younger I used to wish I had a magic wand I could make friends with. It's not exactly the same, but your poem really touched me and braught back old feelings. Love your writing, yours truly ~Broken  |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
you sure you would'nt... well now i want a magic wand to find out... well written If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Sea, I didn't mean to do that, on any given day a rainbow may appear, but there must be water to produce it. Thank you Broken, you don’t need the wand now, you have me as a friend. To me it's simple my friends. If she couldn't do it, I wouldn't do it... Avainti, I’d take the wand and bring back a good old dog of mine. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
beautiful Joel, like me you aren't selfish enough to do that. I would bring back my passed on uncle and Grandmother. Great work and a true question of morals A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Joel~ such a sweetie, not selfish at all. Tracie~ Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
i needed to read this poem. as of late i just couldn't believe men felt anything remotely close to what you describe. thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very lovely and feelings I have experienced many times. To know the beauty of love we sometimes experience the sorrow of love. James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Someone once told me I weaved magic, but once the spell is gone, it's gone, it's never the same. This was beautiful. If I had a magic wand I would use it to stop the tears. Although they are needed, they burn. Well, this is depressing isn't it? I loved the piece, truly I did. Kathleen |
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