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Golden Fair Odyssey
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Golden Fair Odyssey |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Open your heart for all to see, the goodness your golden fair Odyssey Shine bright upon this world you love you travel to a land without fear a flight a dove. They’ll see you coming for miles around, this dove within a hawks town. Traveling upon your virtuous steed, to fulfill your warriors deed. You set your sights far and wide, isolated those loves close -- you hide. So go forth and win this battle of yours, we sit at home light a candle and let the waters pour. Strike forth your sword of light and shine, but let it be known your mine. Heart and spirit you’ve given to me, our loves greater, grander than all the sea Ulysses traveled some-what like this for20 years, Triton couldn’t detour his quest to reclaim his beloved, even his dog died with happy tears. We’ll wait upon your return warrior of mine, we’ll wait for the passing and the end of time. Give it your best and charge among the horde, and think of me least a chance in life even when bored. Hoping it’s worth this battle of yours, each breath each moment your life essence soars. Lighting a candle for your safe return, like so many centuries lovers concern. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this reminded me of "Braveheart" and was romantic, timeless and moving. Hope to see much, much more Kathleen |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I agree with Irish Rose, very romantic and most definately timeless. BRAVO  Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exquisite poem, Joel. This one soars all of it's own. michael |
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