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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-04-08 08:50 PM


I want to reassert my memories,
For that is all I have left you see,
Life's highway crowded with leavers and searchers,
The same as me.

My life so precarious,
Balanced on the edge of reality,
Teetering and tottering,
One wrong move and I'm gone, falling free..

I'm too young to feel so old,
To innocent to know such pain,
People only take, take, take,
Whatever they can gain.

I am invisible and small,
The voice in the wilderness,
Some choose to silence it's mournful cry,
I am lost somewhere in space and time.

The fragrance of dreams fills the forest,
Children pause and take heed of the smell,
Do not forget it my little ones,
Within those dreams and realities is the place where happiness dwells.

The fragrance changes,
It has now become nostalgia,
Dreams to revisit occasionally,
Memories to cry over, when there is no one there.

Somewhere between childhood and adolescence,
There are harsh realities
Tests, deaths, feats, rites, stories and songs,
And ultimately the judgements.

I'll hope and pray that life judges me kindly,
That it won't take away the few things I hold so dear,
That it will allow me the hope to start again,
At the beginning of each new year.



 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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Hope, tears, and renewal
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since 2000-03-27
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1 posted 2000-04-08 08:55 PM


I loved this!  It's so true, so true...
Isis
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2 posted 2000-04-08 09:05 PM


Thanks HTAR  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-09 01:53 AM


I pray for a new beginning each year.
Thank you. This is good.
Joel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-09 02:03 AM


Thanks Joel  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Michael
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5 posted 2000-04-09 04:31 AM


Isis, you shine of "hope" brighter than anyone I know.  I wish I had half the inspiration you did.


michael

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-04-09 09:27 AM


mistress of the dark is shining SO VERY BRIGHT in this one...
perfection from your pen girl
very nice
jm

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
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7 posted 2000-04-09 01:12 PM


Wonderful my friend. . . you do shine in this one. . .

Life will never take away the things that you hold dear. . . from any of us. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-04-09 09:36 PM


Michael, hope and inspiration are tidal with me just like everyone else, I have my ups and downs, believe me....
Janet Marie, thanks hon..
Sven, thanks I hope life doesn't take away any more from me, I don't know if I COULD take it..


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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