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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
Demons Demons haunt me at night When I'm alone When all have gone home They come and talk to me Death is quiet Death is peace You will get nowhere in this world You're different Not made from the same mold Too sensative, too weak Love will not find you Love does not want you I lay in my bed Covers over my head I replay images of my pain I play images of my death I wonder if it would matter Why can't anyone see? Too little, too late I have sealed my fate... |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
zumble, So many of us have Demons come at night. I know that feeling all to well. Lying in a tear soaked bed, feeling all the pain again 10 fold. Time heals, be strong. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
z-first let me say this was very good. i felt every word. and related as well. next let me say that i think you should be very proud and hold tightly to the fact that you are not of the same mold as everyone else in this world. and there is absolutely nothing wrong with being sensitive and compassionate. the world needs more people with those qualities. anyway, i just wanted to say that this was good, and very familiar to me. keep writing and, the things you listed to be faults in this, are really attributes, in my eyes anyway. (sorry to ramble  ) |
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sports2girl Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14 |
very good peom, i feel like that way many times at night. Dont ever give up |
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HelenaJ Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81Kitchener, ont. Canada |
Very Good Z. Can't even begin to count the nights where I've done the exact same. I know it can become hard but somedays the smallest thing can almost abolish the memory of those nights. Try to hang in there! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I have fought and shadow danced with the very same demons, they are truly week Take a step toward your destiny (spread your strength to others) and let fate take care of it’s self Joel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I love the night I often find it empowering, except for those demons that visit us all occasionally. Fight them, they are only there to cause trouble!! With love, and hope look to the light, the beauty in your life, and that will exorcise them!! Take heart! A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well I for one am not stranger to the demons of night. But your fate is not sealed, my friend. The demons need you far more than you might think - it's your decision to let them feed on you or not. Excellant poem, btw. Michael |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
demon spawn in my mind planting pain in behind every scream is mine tonight all we are darkness and light Demon spawn haunt my mind in the night when i cant fight without the light guiding my hand all i am is up for grabs Demon spawn in my hand I have control over the devil in man now i am the richest man Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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