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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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Last Time Once more I allowed myself too much. Now a dissappointing figure Guides me through the tunnel. I can never reach the light. A walking shadow Ipulsively stalks my presence Disfiguring all that I have loved up to this point. One more time I told myself with such enthusiasm that I cannot deny I have fallen. And now my regrets are massive This pattern is continuously repeating itself And yet I can't break away from the grasp which he holds on me Never again. Never again..... |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Very creative poem you have written there. Deep as well. Welcome to Passions. Ronil Ronil (the one and lonely) |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Walking thru darkness sucks huh...when we are there, we sometimes hurt ourselves more than the person/s that pushed us there. Well Done! take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is so sad, I hope it is the Last Time you have to feel this way about anyone. But sadly I doubt it will be... Some of life's journey's are too hard.... (HUGS) There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Never again...till next time... That's always been my pattern. Hope you can break the cycle. Great poem. michael |
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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 197Cincinnati, Oh, U.S.A. |
'Life is pain...anyone who says differently is selling something' Yeah but what great poetry comes from it! Well done. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
But SorrowsMystress What will you ever do with all that passion, all that love, all that shining light you possess, center yourself and shine, and like a moth to a flame, or a ship on the stormy sea, searching for the lighthouse lit bright, you will survive. And a true heart that needs this light, will find you. Joel |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I've been through this "tunnel" twice in the past year, and the mistakes we repeat seem to bring the most passion. Why is that? This was wonderful Kathleen |
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