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If You Must Know Why
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If You Must Know Why |
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LeeSabina Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 10 |
If you must know why I choose to die it seems it ain't worth saying but I will try if you must know why I lost my mind,in the mirror I was fading I do not cry if you must know why I'm tired of always faking If you ask me why I will sigh acting cool being smooth, smile the pride I held inside If you have to know why did I explode my voice was always shaking If you have to know I had to go My breath was always wasting If you question this I still insist no other half to have the other half stopped listening If you must place guilt my shoulders were built for it but the eggshells all were breaking If you blame yourself forgive yourself Its my sand in which I'm sinking If you think you see you don't hear me the pain is slowly creeping It's all a ruse I chose to choose If you must know why so do I |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
Lee~ This is a good poem it says a lot and it is very poerful. Good Job ~Angie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Powerful stuff!! Another avenue? Sometimes many people don't even want to know why!! Great work!!  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Great job done on this one. Peace |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I've felt like this. NOT too pleasant is it? It seems like they ask but they really don't even want to listen to the answer! SO fustrating. Joy |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Great poem. I think I know how you feel. It is frustrating and painful... but I think I see the light at the end of the tunnel. I hope you do too. |
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