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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Loving you has been the hardest thing to do Not knowing if you are being honest Not knowing if you are being true.. Wondering if what you feel... Is coming from the heart Are you looking for a way out? Or are you looking for a fresh start?! Words out of your mouth convey sincerity But actions speak louder than words As you have plainly shown me... Your eyes filled with honesty Your mind being confused Your heart feeling lonely I'm feeling used... When will you face reality? Is it so hard to see? Is your mask of confusion blinding the sight of me? So take your time...if you must Cause I'm here for the taking But don't take too long... Because I won't stand around waiting! < !signature--> [This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
I have these feelings...they say one thing and show me another..i wonder is it me who's confused or is it them....i loved the way you ended it..shows strength...i love that! great work! take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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thebeautybrat Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 114Florida |
this poem is grr-8!!! i absolutely love it cuz everyone has these feelings at least once in their life!!! i think it's grr-8 that you know how to express feelings and that's a grr-8 quality to have!! you must be a grr-8 person!!! come by and visit one of my poems!! they are called *This Is What Some Would Call Love* and *The Only Place I Wanna Be* Tell me your thoughts!!!! Thanks!!! |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
so true, so true... sometimes we have to be patient but we don't have to like it!!!  well done! i like this alot...and i know where you're coming from. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem Virgo, I loved the end: So take your time...if you must Cause I'm here for the taking But don't take too long... Because I won't stand around waiting! good don't wait, waiting only consumes time..time that you could be using for something more important to yourselt and your heart. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
"Loving you has been the hardest thing to do Not knowing if you are being honest Not knowing if you are being true" liked this one a lot... good work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I especially liked the last four lines..it shows that the other person is the confused one...you are seeing everything very clear. James |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
This is a great poem. This sounds like me ~~~~~ Loving you has been the hardest thing to do Not knowing if you are being honest Not knowing if you are being true.. Wondering if what you feel... Is coming from the heart Are you looking for a way out? Or are you looking for a fresh start?! Words out of your mouth convey sincerity But actions speak louder than words As you have plainly shown me... ~~~~~~ I love it good job explaining these feelings. ~Angie |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
thank you all for your response on my poem...I didn't realize it would hit so close to home for so many people. Again, thank you for your support. Virgo |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - great poem. Not an enviable position to be in at all, though. Bet that confusion would disappear quick if you stopped waiting... (or at least appeared to). Michael |
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