Dark Poetry #1 |
A Dream |
Carson E. G. Smith New Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 6Newfoundland, Canada |
A Dream One night I had a dream, A dream of all a dreams, I dreamt of death, I could not see, Why do these feelings come over me? I was not afraid; I did not care, For I was dead and had no fear, The dark was nice and so fulfilling, The echoing sounds of someone singing. The mournful cries and help was loud, But I just sat upon my cloud, I listened close, but could not see, Oh the torture that came over me. Take my hand I yelled aloud, For I am here upon my cloud, I reached and waved but still no sign, I wonder why that I am blind? I reached so far and fell so deep, I wonder if I could be asleep? I fell and fell for what seemed forever, The mournful cries just made me shiver. As I was about to reach the end, I awoke with fear I need a friend, But I was alone and I could see, Oh the torture that was over me. Was this reality or just a dream? I yelled so loud – I could not scream, The fear was great what could I do? I just laid in my bed and thought of you. -Carson Edward George Smith |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Carson~ this is fantastic! I really liked the edning lines.-SEA |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
fantastic indeed. the flow was wonderful. and i could relate more than i would of liked too. well done! |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Incredible...You had me there sitting in that cloud with you... |
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