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~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128


0 posted 2000-03-27 07:32 PM


believe it or not,
innocence once
gleamed in my eyes.
where did it go?
you ask.
it left
with the destruction
of my soul.


 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

© Copyright 2000 ~Venus~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-27 10:04 PM


powerful emotions venus...much said in a few words..good work, take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-27 10:57 PM


Wow,

Concise and powerful...

Great job

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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