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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-03-27 05:14 PM



The Heart
Torn to pieces
Bleeding in my worn hands
Shattered and unwanted

The world around
fades, as an illusion
A hopeful wish
from my heart?

It fades into blackness
as the pain stabs deeper
To have a dagger rip open
my heart, how less painful

How a dagger would
be a mercy, instead
of the pain of knowing
the Truth

The Truth,
I am dispensable
Unwanted, just
a little toy to everyone

Falling...falling deeper
For Eternity?
No one there to catch me
Evil, evil is the world

My Heart cannot
Endure, bleeding from wounds,
nor can I endure
this fight furthermore.

Arms out,
as I was on the Cross
the plaguing darkness comes,
I surrender....



© Copyright 2000 Daniel Huron - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-27 07:34 PM


Great visuals here, I enjoy your style Daniel, don't try to mimic anyone, write yourself, the way that comes naturally.
Great work!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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