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suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-09-29 06:27 PM

I shall bleed to wash away sin.
I shall die to end suffering.
Upon this cross I die for you.
So he said and so he lied.
I have sinned and am damned eternally.
I have and will always suffer.
He died upon that symbol not for us but himself.
He did so to clense his sin, and to end his suffering.
Is this a man we worship, no not I,
For I believe not in false prophets.

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life is short kill quick

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

1 posted 1999-09-29 06:59 PM

This has powerful words!!
Welcome to the Dark Forum!!

Jenny

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-09-29 07:28 PM

Good Poem Tom

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-09-29 07:32 PM

thx jenny and amy.

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

4 posted 1999-09-29 09:44 PM

Very sad picture, my friend. Very sad.

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