Dark Poetry #1 |
Losing You |
StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
You are not worth my tears, But yet they continue to fall. Out of my life means out of my mind, Now I really begin to bawl. I need to get over you, You've caused me too much pain. Yet you are the one I want, Life was so simple until you came. Why do you torture me so, You attempt to still be my friend, But seeing you brings me strife, For my love for you will never end. Life with you was so bright, Why did you want it all to end. I wish for you on every star, I wish to have you again. But through all the tears and pain I know, I guess we weren't just meant be to be at all. That is the one fact that hurts, Yes that is the most painful fact of all. It takes a minute to give your heart away, It takes as second for it to break. It takes a lifetime to forget that special someone, And the impact that they make. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
oops,is this personal?if it is, i do hope you feel better now....keep writing....writing provides an outlet to vent out all our frustrations,hurt,pain...etc i think this was very heart-felt.i esp like this line "I wish for you on every star" |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
hey- love the poem...Once again it was Wonderful! bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
I love your poem...it's really good, despite you not thinking so. Is it how you feel right now? You know I'll always be here for you if you wanna talk. Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Nice poem. So full of expression and feelings. It takes alot to get over someone we love. But let "time" heal you. Peace, Dark_kisses_within I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
Wonderful poem. I can relate to it totally, I know just how you felt when you wrote it. Time is a great healer even though we don't realise it at the time! Best Wishes Sandra |
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Dream_Cloud Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 10Daytona Beach, FL USA |
I like this poem alot...showing the heartbreak and tragedy of a slit-up. Something most people can relate to well! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The writing is wonderful..the message one I share...looking back on my relationship I determined that we should have only remained friends... because after all was done I was the only one who had fell in love. James |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Great poem...give it time...the pain eventually does go away. |
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