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~Drowning~
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~Drowning~ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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Watching out the window I truely see no hope I feel as if I am drowning Waiting for a boat To save me from this black water So I can once again see To give my lungs the air That they so badly need To give my heart the love I so truely yearn for To open up my wings And let me once again soar These things I really need I do not see to come true For the darkness has me now Feeling so lonely and so blue I do not love you for being perfect..... I love you for being perfect for me!! |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hope you feel better soon! Emotionaly anyway! Smiles to you!  Joy |
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Darla New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 8 |
Your poem is really nice. I can understand how you feel in it.. I hope you are feeling better sense you wrote it.. If you ever feel alone there will always be someone there for you to talk to. Thank you for sharing it with us.. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
But after the darkness there is always another dawn... Well written There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sadly beautiful emotions in this one... but very sweetly expressed...longingly lovely take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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