Dark Poetry #1 |
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sweet sweet breath |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
sweet sweet breath sweet sweet breath on cherished skin, the softest kiss as the day begins. treasured night of memories, endless passion ore calmest seas. dawn breaks eternal fair, with the dampness of the dew. impressions made and not forgotten, my mind absorbed with you. hold me to your bosom tight, gently kiss me fears away. tell me that you love me, as the night gives in to day. the freshness of the morning air, within my dreams i vividly see. draw me close and hold me tight, and never ever leave. love me now and love me tomorrow, spill your breath upon my skin. let the sunrises come and go, each day we will begin again. mo |
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mcclain Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 13 |
very nice. i like the flow. |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Great work...Imagery is awesome...Flows like water...*huggz* wonderfully written |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Great work...Imagery is awesome...Flows like water...*huggz* wonderfully written Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
i think this is one of the most beautiful pieces i have read by you. your poems just keep getting better my friend. always a treat when you post every now and then. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
beautiful, reminds me of a lullabye. *sigh* jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
thank you all for such sweet comments, danni everything you have to say is music to my ears darlin. thanks mo |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful words!!! ![]() Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Soft and romantic writing...really enjoyed reading this. James |
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