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Missed_fantasy Junior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 16Mankato, MN, USA |
Asleep, it chases me Awake, it stalks me Around corners, up in trees Alive in the moonlight Exists in sunbeams to shadow trips Haunts my essence with chilling tendrils claw my soul, grip my heart Let the blood run up the elbows congealing to crusty hard like a morbid erection flattened on cement sweet, salty, and delicious Ambrosia of Satans palace Licks its lips It lusts for more I'm running faster Not fast enough Can feel his breath like icicles dripping off the recesses of my spirit So afraid of the unknown beast Sleepless unrest... ------------------ Love always and blessed be my children |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
< ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (When I hear the bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Yes, haunting is the word...Good job.. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Definitely haunting....loved the line "Ambrosia of Satans palace"...excellent work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I don't know how I missed this one - it is fabulous! ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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