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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
And so it seems.. When light changes to shadow that all I have lost.. is all that I have become.. In a wolrd I am... things they don't understand... Weep not for my passing on.. rejoice in my passing through.. in the end all things begin.. so this is the unraveling... the rope pulls so taught... just time now for one last thought... my art is all I had... razor beading..cuts welling... my art was all I knew... darkness drawing...heart relaxing... and this...oh and this.. screaming silence...release...came..through.. and... this... I... pass... unto... Edward A. Beerman |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Weep not for my passing on.. rejoice in my passing through.. in the end all things begin.. --------------- my art was all I knew... darkness drawing...heart relaxing... and this...oh and this.. screaming silence...release...came..through.. and... this... I... pass... unto... ---------------- exceptional piece here...truly... your talent in your art shines in this poems emotions...this is excellent! take care, please(smile) janet marie and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Absolutely wonderful...I loved it from the very beginning to the very end. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
beautiful! sad but not full of sorrow for there is a hope there! i like this! good work, my friend!  |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Thanks you all...and, to ease some minds...this isn't a suicide notice, but a follow up to my previous poem.. EAB |
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