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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
0 posted 2000-03-21 10:21 AM

Take me death for I no longer care
For this pain from life is too much to bare
I sit and cry and wonder "why me?"
Why do I indulge in this pain to be
The place I shall go will be better than this
I long for you Death and your deadly kiss
Kiss me softly upon my sweet lips
Give me your blood and let me take sips
I want to feel you running through my vien
You are my hero, Death, you can take away the pain.
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554
1 posted 2000-03-21 10:49 AM

another perfect one for here...dark and beautiful, i love the last lines impact,
take care, jm
Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
2 posted 2000-03-22 04:40 PM

awesome piece...perfect for a memorable suicide note so i think it's definitely safe to say this is dark    wonderful imagery...amazing what you can do with the simple image of blood!  
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