Dark Poetry #1 |
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~Take Me~ |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas ![]() |
Take me death for I no longer care For this pain from life is too much to bare I sit and cry and wonder "why me?" Why do I indulge in this pain to be The place I shall go will be better than this I long for you Death and your deadly kiss Kiss me softly upon my sweet lips Give me your blood and let me take sips I want to feel you running through my vien You are my hero, Death, you can take away the pain. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
another perfect one for here...dark and beautiful, i love the last lines impact, take care, jm |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
awesome piece...perfect for a memorable suicide note so i think it's definitely safe to say this is dark ![]() |
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