Dark Poetry #1 |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Untitled Time and again I feel the pain Familiar now As an old friend A companion Through many nights Shaping my dreams Taking it's toll Yet comfortable In it's strangeness To accept pain So easily Insanity? Copyright 1999 Gary Pence Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Great Jonas ! To accept pain So easily Insanity? No never insanity I think it is a learned behavior ... so use to pain something is not right when it is not there "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Great job!! insanity? well, I don't know...if a person is insane, can they be capable of realizing it? take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Time and again I feel the pain Familiar now As an old friend A companion ---------- jonas, this is great, i all too well related to this ones emotions... insane in the pain...perfect poem take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Thank you StarrGazer, Broken Wings, and Janet Marie. This poem is sort of open to many different types of pain...just depends on the reader. Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jonas, Great poem. I relate to the pain being your companion. After a while you numb to it though. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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