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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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Day by day I come to this site With hopes to write Something worthy of posting Think that I can speak me mind With full freedom Even though in the real world Outside of my computer I feel like something else Somethign that I have to hide From the world I can't be me Unless I hide behind my computer Will I ever break free What if someone here Knows me Then I will be figured out People will then know Who I am -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Hi, Nice poem expressing your innermost feelings. Keep on writing about what is on your heart. I have been in your situation before feeling like I was on the outside looking in, and maybe not feeling worthy to be anyones friend. Writing helps and so does discovering all the things you have to like about yourself. If you need to talk I am a good listener, just email me. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I too, tend to hide behind my computer and share with strangers what I feel I cannot with others. (Not that we all are strangers). I relate to this, Neala.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Exactly, what Is the True YOU!? I too look at the screen with confidence, but those who look at me, I am quite shy. Very good poem. Hope to read more of your poetic phrases.... Much love, ONe love, PeACE |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Neala, Boy can I relate to this!! In "real life" I am much more shy than behind this screen. On here and especially in Passions, I am able to share with people the true me. I hope you are also. Don't hide the real person you are. I am sure you are a wonderful person. I look forward to reading your work in the future. Take care of yourself. AMY  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I understand that feeling...if you ever want to talk you know how to find me... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
so true neala, we do feel safe and secure in our cyber world...and in here in the darkness, (smile) take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It's funny isn't it. On the computer here or in chat rooms, we can be anyone we want to be. We can be open, vulnerable, expose inner most feelings etc. I wonder what people think of me sometimes... Like is she mad or what? LOL Here in Passions we are lucky to have it and each other, to share with, lean on, cry or laugh with. There is always someone around to lend an ear. Well expressed as always Neala May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Shatter the mask Neala. . .I know that it can be easy to show yourself behind this wall of technology. . . but we can see the real you in this poem. . .and we would like to see more, hopefully, with our help you can break the mask and let the real you fully shine through. . . Wonderful words. . . ----------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Hello, I am glad everyone can relate to my writing. Everyone in here has pretty much seen the real me as for everyone else I think not. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I can understand the feeling of not knowing if someone you know could be here and you not know it... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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