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Simply satisfying....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-03-12 09:41 PM

just holding.. to regain my purity
just needing..that little bit of insecurity
just wanting..another role to play
just another...difference to push away
just simply satisfying..
when your dying here
with nothing more to say

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-12 11:18 PM

this one is very good J, very...you have spoke MUCH emotion in a few, but powerful words. nice work. jm

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-03-13 12:21 PM

some of the deepest feelings come in few words. well done.

i love too much, and not enough.

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

3 posted 2000-03-13 05:58 PM

Nice piece. Hope to hear more of your work, Youve painted a really huge picture, with so little words. Wish I could do that....Let me try. Much love, One love, PEACE

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2000-03-13 10:47 PM

Jackal~ this is very good!-SEA

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-03-14 12:07 PM

Just keeping your head above water hon? I can understand.. and you will surface again.

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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