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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Who am I to say? Lost in the shades of grey... With fury, and furor, emblazed in spite Is that enough to last? those jagged breaks... of pain inbetween nothing.. Show little of who I am... What you see is what you get.. still... I am more than you can precieve I am within as well as without.. without knowing who I am ... who am I to say? Could I be the pale horse rising... heroic in nothing... simply me... Charging into the fray... Lost a little more that before... Shall I be lost without you? Who am I to say? As if words could save you this day... Will I give to the pressure? bend to the torrent? Or,.. perhaps, thrah ou against your withered frame? You seem to know these answers... What will I do? Who am I to say..... For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is VERY well written...the use of the repetative phrase makes the poem...well expressed emotions..nice work...jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely as always, Edward, you always write so well my friend  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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