Dark Poetry #1 |
And For What.... |
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
AND FOR WHAT... Well I've walked the painted desert, And I delved forbidden seas. I've stood high, king of the mountain, Just to be brought to my knees. I've seen God's rise from the ashes, I've seen stars fall from the skies. I swore I saw forever once, But only through another's eyes. I've felt love and I've felt passion, And a billion emotions in between. I've touched the tail of a tiger, Laid in the satin sheets of a queen. I've been bound by sacred circles, Cursed by powers higher in might. I've sought shelter in Darkness. I've danced with eagles in flight. And I've carried this cross of shame To a self-dug grave, it's true. A crown of thorns for thirty pieces of silver And a kiss on the cheek from you. Micahel Anderson < !signature--> 'Tis true, Love lasts forever, Only her memory slips away. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-04-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I read poetry, so many each day, knowing that a rare post will stop me and take me away to where that poet goes, to reach greater understanding. This one took me for a ride. What a trip. Michael, this one I enjoyed so much! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've seen God's rise from the ashes, I've seen stars fall from the skies. **I swore I saw forever once, But only through another's eyes.** I've felt love and I've felt passion, And a billion emotions in between. I've touched the tail of a tiger, Laid in the satin sheets of a queen."... ---- ...And I've carried this cross of shame To a self-dug grave, it's true. A crown of thorns for thirty pieces of silver And a kiss on the cheek from you. M,your talent for creating imagery and expressing your vision is SO evident in this piece..this is exceptional...once again.(smile)jm ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. janet marie |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I can feel the heartache in this piece Michael .... it is beautiful, as always .. The last stanza is amazing ..... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
this piece was amazing. it gave me chills and i loved every minute of it. thank you so much for writing this and sahring it. i am glad i had the privelage of reading it. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
The last stanza is amazing indeed ! Sent some chills right up my spine.... |
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