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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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The Pain Of Loosing...... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The Pain Of Loosing Your Best Friend Peeling back your eye lids I still can't see you And you, my dead, friend, Can no longer see me Once so close We didn't have to see To feel eachother's emotions And touch eachother's soul Now you've seemed to die away Someone I do not know Floating on a sea so far I can't reach you with the longest oar I'm on a raging sea When you float freely on Water over my head Drowing in my own misery Without you So even now as I peel back your eye lids As you lie here on the deck Of this ship on this calm ocean I can't see you I want to see you! I want to see you! PLEASE! I cry into your eyes No realization, no awaken My dead friend.... You'll never awake You'll never be my friend again. Will you? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is emotional, powerful, and intense, i'm sorry your going thru this. take care, janet marie When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
the first picture in my head was that of my best friend and as i read the poem i thought about how it would kill me to lose her in any way whether physical or mental, emotional. great piece, pulled my emtions right out of me. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You have lost her physically but not emotionally in the heart and memory she will always be with you. You know have another angel in heaven watching over you. I'm so sorry for your loss.. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I know exactly where you are...It is just such a painful experience, to have known and trusted someone with our very souls only to have them stomp on them. I hope things can be straightened out between the two of you, it's such an awful place for you to be. Your poem was so wonderfully descriptive, and full of emotions, thanks for sharing it. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I probably should have fully explained when I posted this. I didn't physicaly loose my best friend. She did die though, the friendship did, because there is nothing left, no connection, and that hurts just as much as if she would have died. Thanks for your heartfelt replies. I really appreciate them. It is so hard, because people change when you don't, and you can't even help that.  Joy |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This is powerful, Joy. But realize you will hold the friendship forever...the body is dead but the soul is eternal. Take pleasure in the happiness you shared while the two were one. Michael |
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