Dark Poetry #1 |
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Cave Painting |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Rippled blankets across the open sky Fire burning with a chaotic heat All realization shattering her face Smashing it into the ground, porcelain cold and blank Glowing brightly in a black forest of rain Face so painted, drained of it's original flavor Only a faint perfume left behind, only the smallest remains So faint to the touch So real to the eyes Carved deep within the cheeks of her face, tears wearing her down So very many, in the silence of lonely nights Arms empty, skin burried into the shadows Walking lost in the labyrinth, the maze she grew from stone Pierce it and break it, Make it all die away Beating on the wall, screaming so mute Trapped forever here, a tomb built of bones [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I forgot to say this - I'm sorry for not reading and replying to your poems. I've been really busy lately and haven't been able to spare the time for poetry. Not even mine...but I should be able to come by more often. Thankx for your time. ![]() "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well Angel of Darkness welcome home, and this was wonderful... well thought out, a different perspective etc. really great for a comeback ![]() May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you very much Isis. It's good to be back. ![]() "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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star83 Junior Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 26SD |
Very well done...good imagery... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow, this is exceptional...such vivid and excellent imagery...very well written...welcome back to the dark ![]() take care, janet marie When you see through love's illusions, there lies the danger... And your perfect lover just looks like a perfect fool So you go running off in search of a perfect stranger While the loneliness seems to spring from your life Like a fountain from a pool. Jackson Browne |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you Star and Janet...your replies are deeply appreciated. ![]() "They can take away my belongings. They can beat me. They can torchure me and they can kill me. Then they will have my dead body. But they will not have my obedience." -Gandhi ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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