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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Broken-hearted (how cleche`) |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
you touched my heart with lying words you killed my joy and dying hurts you saw me cry you saw it all you did enough to make tears fall you tore my soul now pieces heal you never thought about how i would feel so now i cry as you stand tall you broke my heart now pieces fall Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
devin, I feel the pain in this one...I love this poem... very well expressed... love hurts BAD sometimes...Im thankful to have the poetry as an outlet!! take care, janet marie Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... Jackson Browne *I miss you baby... I love you...always. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Nah, love doesn't hurt sometimes. It hurts 99% of the time. Somebody please show us that other 1%! Breaking up can be a soul-wrenching experience, can't it devinmaria? You expressed the emotions involved with grace. What's worse, breaking up or loving someone that does not love you in return? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not cleche' but painful, you wrote this with your pain and sensitivity. Well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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