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Oops...I didn't make it Step 2...

Maya the Brokenhearted
Member

since 2000-02-13

Posts 66

0 posted 2000-02-28 08:51 AM

*sigh* I'll make progress in baby steps it seems

damn that man for being who he is! hmmph! I WILL conquer this.

so weak am I
shaking with fear
from the turmoil
of emotions
that shoot through my body

regret
runs high, rampant, and free
as I think over
all I have done
and said
and wished

I can't call back the letter
or the words of my poem
so now you know
that I was thinking of you
when I should have been
thinking of how to set my heart free
from this bondage I am in
I, the unwilling captive
you, now full of hope
from one word
*DAMMIT*

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2000-02-28 09:32 AM

Step 2, Admittance....
Your coming along fine, Maya.

btw - My name is Michael and I'm a "broken heart" too. We can get through this...I know we can....LOL

michael

A very silly boy
Junior Member

since 2000-02-23

Posts 16

2 posted 2000-02-28 02:41 PM

*standing up and looking around nervously*
"My name's Silly Boy and I'm a loveaholic!"

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-28 06:51 PM

Maya this is GREAT...I love your being able to keep your sense of humor about it all... as for needing "Man rehab" ... welcome to my world..(smile)

She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

4 posted 2000-02-29 11:03 AM

"so now you know
that I was thinking of you
when I should have been
thinking of how to set my heart free"

these are great lines. i'm enjoying your "rehab" as well. We'll be your support group.

Jannel

"I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"

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