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star83
Junior Member

since 2000-02-27

Posts 26
SD

0 posted 2000-02-27 10:31 PM

Your lips--
'Tis sweeter than wine; with kisses adorned thee,
Forsooth thy blessid of love's ephemeral taste.
Oh, save the day heretofore whence I shall receive--
kisses from thou,
With inexplicable passion shall bring thee--
Bring again, bring again!

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 2000-02-27 10:51 PM

so refreshing! not a style i come across often. i loved this piece. there is so much in just a kiss...... looking forward to more of your work. and welcome to passions.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-27 11:04 PM

Hi and welcome to passions...
great piece of work..I cant write like this..Ive tried...all my thee's and thou's sounded funny..you made it look easy, very nice...take care, janet marie

She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-02-27 11:49 PM

Welcome Star!! I love this style of writing too. There is a poet who frequents OP#6 who writes this way, his name is Loneheart, you should check some of his stuff out, I'm sure you'll like it.
I'm now off to read your 2nd poem.

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2000-02-28 01:04 AM

~star
welcome to passions. i stand envious of you..great piece of poetry you have here. i cant not write like this have tried too...hi janet im here again lol.

simply breathtaking hon,
take care,
amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-02-28 04:27 AM

Nicely written in old english I presume and truly revealing the value and the passion of a kiss. James

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