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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-02-27 07:47 PM



Have you seen me today?
I seem to be missing
I think I stayed home sick
I think I lost the war
I wish I knew who I was
Who I am
And who I am ment to be
I think you know me better than I do
Well, have you thought you don't know who I am?
So who is the person that you know?
Is she nice?
Is she happy?
Is she weird?
Is she normal?
Is she ugly?
Who is she?
What does she think and who could she be?
Does she miss me?


 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-02-27 08:15 PM


Question, realities, answers wow!  Well the TanAngel I know is a caring soul, sometimes down and/or confused but with a true heart.
Hope you feel better about yourself hon *HUGS*

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-02-27 08:39 PM


When I'm feeling down I ask the questions that your poem poses.  I can't help but wonder where I'm being kept hidden away.  A lifetime of searching for what lies within me, blanketed under saddness so that I remain unseen - even to myself.
danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-02-27 10:39 PM


i have often wondered many of those same things. self introspection can be many things, eighther bringing some answers or more confusion. well done, tan.
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-02-28 12:36 PM


I think I stayed home sick
I think I lost the war

These two lines were awesome. The whole concept was great.good work.
jannel

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2000-02-28 12:55 PM


~tanangel...

i'm fairly new to passions...and so don't know you really. however i loved your poem..if it speaks anything about the person (and i am sure that it does) then i am in for a treat i can see. keep up the great work...and lift that chin and SMILE!  

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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