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No One's Perfect |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Time heals all wounds they say but time could never take this hurt away it is too great it is too strong how could my heart have been so wrong I thought you perfect as anyone could be I thought you were the one for me But now I guess I finally see no one's perfect ~silly me~ -SEA- *this is an old one, I thought it might fit in better here. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Old, New, what is the difference, it is still great! "Silly us", Sea. Hurt never really goes away, does it? A world of "what ifs" if you ask me. Going to Open to look for more of your verse. I am looking forward to it. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Well you're right Sea, it fits perfictly. I have been in those shoes and could relate to this one well. Thank you for sharing it! G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sea, glad your here in DP...this poem is great..perfect rhyme...nice job! take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Glad you popped in again Sea! Yep as you well know this is a perfect poem for the dark forum. Well done, well expressed too  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Just wanted to say thanks for reading this. I had no idea if this was considered dark. It felt dark at the time!-SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea this poem has such a beautiful flow. In fact something I am going thru right now has revealed me to be far from perfect...and of course I already knew that anyway. James |
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