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Weary Humanity II (thanks, janet marie) |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
On a web of deceits I awake to smothering heat With darkness all around Blotting out all the sound Sweat assures me of reality Dripping like tears off of me As a fly I cling To this unearthly thing The pain still remains My mind still stained Must be my heartbeat pounding Its noise resounding Out of the silence somewhere As if I really did care All I can do is crawl To find some sort of wall Remnants of my guardian Of stone and towers golden Delusions akin to life Cuts me like a knife Until I smell a breath Foretelling news of death She is coming I can tell Queen of this hell I feel movement along the web Sounds like the undead Can only make before they devour Their prey in their final hour Don’t want to end this way But then I hear her say: “You might think it too soon, too few moons. And when you have to give in, I’ll be back again.” |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I thank you!!!  this poem is AWESOME!! and it BELONGS here in DP...its perfect! Excellent read!I'm glad you came to visit hope you'll stay  take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks for reading these silly little words of mine. I think i will stay. I've been posting love poems only, but i think i have tons more dark stuff like this. I do feel at home now. *S* Thanks janet |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ your dark side is just as good as the lovey~dovey stuff.-SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thanks so much SEA. I didn't think any of my darkness would be fit for in here. Plus, i never had the time to come and look *S*. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
JML - you certainly do fit in here. This was a great dark read!! Awaiting more, hope to see some soon. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
didn't even know there was a part two. glad i dug back a few pages. quite the fitting sequel. very well done. |
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