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hostile New Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 6 |
This poem is more like a lyric. It expresses my deep feelings for what I believe in. I also want to dedicate it to you all. Love you all. War Revenge! I'm screaming revenge again! Wrong! I've been wrong for far too long. been constantly so frustrated, i've moved mountains with less. when I channel my hate to productive, I don't find it hard to impress hate this, hate me, hate this, right approach for the wrong. its time to spread the word. Let the voice be heard. bones in traction hands break to hone raw energy bold and disastrous, my ears can't hear what you say to me! 'cause i'm on a new level my mind has been imbezzeled new life in place of old life, unscarred by trials. A new level of confidence and power A New Level |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
"hate this, hate me, hate this" is such a wonderful line. and i am completely taken by the lack of definite images. everything seems to mean a bit more than exactly what it says. i enjoyed this. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
VERY VERY VERY Powerful. I like this one a lot. But i'm so shy, thats why I let my pen be my sword, my protection from life. Nice piece, and well said. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Strong fighting words, I like!! Well done  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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