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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
kicking and screaming violently throwing oceans of salt angrily growing hatred and pain fearfully showing evil just rips anger not slowing betrayal, denial love never knowing fists in the air violently throwing streaming down my face salt it is flowing betrayal, denial love never knowing wishes of revenge devilishly growing hatred and pain angrily showing needing a reason regret you are showing pain in my eyes anger keeps growing |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
beautiful expresion anger pain excelent first piece welcome to the darkness friend art and creation in constant turmoil rock the world with blows of brilliance bringing tears to the eyes and love to part they bring a knife to the eternal heart Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace, of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Welcome to Passions-devinmaria(beautiful name)  excellent expression of rage and emotion... look forward to more of you work.. take care, janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I liked this one alot. The anger pours out of it like water. Welcome from myself also  Jennifer |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Devinmaria, I liked this very much too. I look forward to more poetry from you. Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark forum. Liked your expressions of anger and hurt in this. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
i apprecaite all the feedback. my first post and im so excited about this new site that i found. thank you all for the warm welcome. i look forward to reading your words as well. thank you again. |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
I liked this, very strong words, with very strong thoughts, a very strong peice. I feel this one, the feeling of anger and pain, not two of lifes most wonderful feelings. But how can you live life without feeling pain and anger, they'll haunt you till you leave this life, and return in the next. Very good. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i liked this. you expressed emotion well and in an interesting format. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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