Dark Poetry #1 |
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Depression |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Dark and deadly Evil's ally Painful feeling Rebel to your heart Eternally occurs Solitary moments Single thoughts In depth sorrow Ordinarily forgotten Not remembered This may not seem like a poem but look real closely and u will see the title. To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
great job...very creative, and it looks like a poem to me...from all directions. janet marie "...we were born before the wind...also younger than the sun... and my heart you have won...as we sailed into the mystic... I just want to rock your gypsy soul- just like in the days of old... and together we will float-into the mystic... Van Morrison |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx for ur reply and if u want it to be to you that's ok, but it was something i wrote when i was really down and out so it won't happen often. ![]() ![]() To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
This has depression described to a T. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
well done, well thought out and present. Depression who needs it? ![]() Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Depression sucks! I know that for a fact... |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Depression, what a lonely word. This poem reflects the thoughts and feelings I had, when I was depressed. I haven't gotten over it, so it brings back painful thoughts. But this poem was excellent, I've done one similar to this, but the word was HELP. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx all...this is the way i feel most of the time that's why i know exactly how it feels. Its like depression has been meant for me my whole life and no happiness is allowed for me ![]() To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
tryin to keep it up *bump* To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Well, you described a large portion of my life. Well done chic. |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
i wasn't describing ur life mistik...it is mine that i describe, but then again there is alot of people that feel the way i do. though some have ways out of it and the only way that i could be set free from all of this would be to end my life. But i am even to depressed to do that ![]() To be or not to be...that is the question.[hamlet] |
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