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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392
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Look at You Look at you laying over there pulling out your hair adopting the blank stare of my teddybear. Look at you laying over there begging for some one to care pretending to be inanimate like my teddybear. Look at you laying over there attempting to melt my dead cold stare wishing I would pretend I were there trying to make me love you like I do my teddybear. Look at you laying over there I hope you freeze in your pretentious stare. I have accepted, loved, and tried one too many times... now I simpley do not care! (just some thing a bit sarcastic....) There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
absolutely wonderful! i loved it! wish i could show it to my ex!  Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Excellent Sarcasm a-alibaster  Jennifer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I can relate to the last lines "I have accepted, loved, and tried one to many times..now I simply do not care. Something I am going thru right now has given me reason to feel exactly like that. Yes, one to many times. and now I simply do not care. Very nice write. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I too relate, you can only try so many times, in the end, to save yourself, you have to stop caring about their feeble attempts at attention or to emotionally blackmail you. (HUGS) and hope your Valentine's Day is ok.  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Many thank yous to all that responded. I was not sure if any would understand what I was attempting to state....alas, I see that you understood completely!! **hugs tight** Happy V day to you as well Isis, and all!! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Alibaster- this is so great..I dont know how I missed it before...I love the sarcastic wit and angry definace...great work!! janet marie In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won... And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done... ***Still I love the times you've come*** Jackson Browne |
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