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Rene_M
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 26
Melrose Park, IL, 60160

0 posted 2000-02-08 03:10 PM


Nothing here is ever free

Everybody's got their own dues in life to pay
Depression is the price I have to pay
In order to be gay

If there's any happiness, then
there must also be sadness and madness

The Price I pay for my sanity
Is insanity

And to acheive eternal happiness
I must first overcome
My personal sadness

Nothing in this life is ever free
There's always a price I have to pay
In order to enjoy the pleasures of life

I try to live life to it's fullest
And live everyday as if it were the last
To forget about the past

For I know how painful it is to live
When U live with Regret



[This message has been edited by Rene_M (edited 05-11-2000).]

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Rene_M
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 26
Melrose Park, IL, 60160
1 posted 2000-02-08 03:16 PM


Isis,
     I'm finally back, I know it's been a long time since U have last heard from me. But I was away on Christmas Vacation. I went to Mexico and enjoyed myself so much. That I never had time go and have access to a computer. N-Eway, here's my newest one, please tell what U think, and Changes and Suggestions are more than welcomed.
Laterz

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-02-08 05:03 PM


Regret is located in all our closets.  You have to tuck it away, shut the door and go on.  The best regret is for something you did, rather than something you didn't do.
Your sure right about nothing being free, but then it depends on your definition of "free".
Anyway, enjoyed your writing.  I'm new and don't know your work, but this one was worth reading.
DH

Rene_M
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 26
Melrose Park, IL, 60160
3 posted 2000-02-09 11:41 AM


Well thanx Danny. First off Thanx for takin the time to read my lastest poem. And the reason why U haven't seen that much of my work is because, I very much like you am a new member. With this one I only have 2 poems posted. The other one is called "La Puerta" I  know the title is in spanish but the Poem is actually in English. And yeah you're right, but the things I regret are the things I was never willing to do, cuz I didn't have enough guts to do it. N-Eway Thanx again for your comments.
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