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DayDreamer Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 30 |
Hidden inside all of us is a dreamworld A place of fantasy A haven for the weak Hope for the strong Feelings and emotions lie here In a place of wonder A world of grace Full of love We live in reality A place of pain A haven for the dark Prison for the good Feelings and emotions die here In a place of fear A world of sorrow Without love Where are you? "You can't change anything by just sitting back and looking at it."~Cloud |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Like your ending. "Where are you?" I'd rather be in a dreamworld than face the harsh reality of life. That's why I am gald I have this wonderful thing called imagination, so I don't always have to be living in reality.  Enjoyed. Joy |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Were this a philosophy forum I would bring up whether we make our reality, and I do, in fact believe that we at least contribute. But sticking to the topic at hand, I enjoyed this, and I, too like the ending. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I guess the people that posted above, don't have the same dreams I do...sometimes you CAN'T make your dreams a relaty. DayDreamer, I know where your coming from. I would also love to live in a dream. Great poem by the way!! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very good poem Daydreamer...thought provoking and expressive...I guess we all live in both worlds some of the time...we need the fantasty to cope with the reality...and both give us inspiration to write. take care, janet marie ..."when you walked into the room...I saw their faces--- did you know--you made it seem like time was standing still... and I felt---fascination...though I only knew you then--just casually... then you slowly turned and smiled in my direction... and my heart gave me away".... Glass Tiger |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I know exactly where you're coming from. Sometimes your body can be in reality, but your soul is in a dreamworld. ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ *She loves, she's Love, and yet she is not lov'd* |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Great poem. And if you think about it, how would we survive in this world's reality without our dreamworlds to create in. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Yes- Of course I don't quite agree with the emotions disapearing part. When I dream sometimes there are too many emotions that they...OOOOOH...I've got an inspiration! I must go now before it's too late! Petically... Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Being the day dreamer I am, I know how you must have felt writing this poem and a great poem it is.  |
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