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Dark Poetry #1

Into the Killer's Eyes

Lady Bere
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA

0 posted 2000-02-06 01:11 PM

INTO THE KILLER'S EYES

And through the heart my soul to reach
Into thy hands the soul bequeathed
From this day forth to never cry
Though I look into the killer's eyes

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

1 posted 2000-02-06 01:17 PM

so few words-yet so powerful and haunting-i am speechless. well done!

Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear.
-Tool-

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-06 01:38 PM

amazing first impression...
Welcome to Passions,

I look forward to more of your words!!!
take care, janet marie

TanAngel
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

3 posted 2000-02-06 01:54 PM

WELCOME!! I love this peice. I hope to see a lot more of your work here!!!!

"Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

Alina Le Ann
Junior Member

since 2000-01-30

Posts 40
INDIANA

4 posted 2000-02-06 03:53 PM

This is incredible!!

short, sweet and to the point....very grabbing of one's attention....
I too look forward to reading more from you.

Alina Le Ann

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

5 posted 2000-02-06 06:16 PM

I loved this, it had the makings of an epic in the first two lines, wish there had been more!!
Welcome to our passions family

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

catwomen
Junior Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 49

6 posted 2000-02-06 06:22 PM

few words with powerful meaning.
Great poem

Lady Bere
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 73
Valmeyer, Illinois USA

7 posted 2000-02-06 06:28 PM

Thank you all. I'm looking forward to getting to know you through your poetry and introducing myself through mine.

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