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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Into the Killer's Eyes |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
INTO THE KILLER'S EYES And through the heart my soul to reach Into thy hands the soul bequeathed From this day forth to never cry Though I look into the killer's eyes |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
so few words-yet so powerful and haunting-i am speechless. well done! Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
amazing first impression... Welcome to Passions,  I look forward to more of your words!!! take care, janet marie |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
WELCOME!! I love this peice. I hope to see a lot more of your work here!!!! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Alina Le Ann Junior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 40INDIANA |
This is incredible!! short, sweet and to the point....very grabbing of one's attention.... I too look forward to reading more from you. Alina Le Ann |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I loved this, it had the makings of an epic in the first two lines, wish there had been more!! Welcome to our passions family  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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catwomen Junior Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 49 |
few words with powerful meaning. Great poem |
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Lady Bere Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 73Valmeyer, Illinois USA |
Thank you all. I'm looking forward to getting to know you through your poetry and introducing myself through mine. |
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