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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA 
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On the battle field of life There is a choice What to fight for Good or Evil? At the end of the day Do you go home Would you sevive Can we make it threw it There is a fine line between Good and Evil They are separate They have no likeness Execpt they figt For what they believe in -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Neala, Well thought out, well said, well done!  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very good Neala, I like the comparisons made here and the end thought is great...they both fight for what they believe in. so true janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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