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Dark Poetry #1
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hathor
Junior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 17
0 posted 2000-01-30 07:50 PM

Pain fills my mind
and with that
pain now fills my body
with knives made sharp
and pain of steel
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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-31 12:38 PM

Thankfully you didn't get too graphic.

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)
childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
2 posted 2000-02-01 07:24 AM

I relate your poem to emotional pain which indeed does feel like a knife.  I look forward to reading more.
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