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Auricom45
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 19
Hialeah, Florida in the U.S.A

0 posted 2000-01-30 01:03 AM


Enclosed
Four walls, all that is there
What else can I do but sit back and stare
At the world through a frame
What is out there can never be the same
Trapped from having true fun
I would escape from here and run
My joy encased in a pill
My life, it seems, is an ill
All the blanks I cannot fill
If only I ever had the will
I would go out and stand to the ocean
My heart filled with so much emotion
But for now I sit here, wanting to get out
All I can do is scream and shout



 "We have bigger houses and smaller families; more conveniences, but less time; we have more degrees, but less sense; more knowledge, but less judgement; more experts, but more problems; more medicine, but less wellness. We have multiplies our possessions, but reduced our values. We've learned how to make a living, but not a life."

© Copyright 2000 Milton a.k.a. Mil - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-01-31 02:24 PM


Loved this poem Auricom!  (I had to sqiunt a bit to read it though.  Wow, that green is bright!  
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-01-31 09:03 PM


Auricom,
I really love this poem... I always relate to your poems... this one is emotionally beautiful. Also I really like the message of your signature...who's words are they? they speak the truth of life today...sadly.
take care, janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



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