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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
D e Say it. Say it out loud Feel the yawning space in your mouth. Feel the yearning space. Z a i Feel the ah spread down your throat Tingling at your stomach Twinging at your thighs. Y e r Say it. Say it out loud. Feel the yawning Feel the yearning Feel. < !signature--> "Well she wants to live her life, then she thinks about her life... Pulls her hair back as she screams, I don't really want to live this life!" -Train "Meet Virginia" [This message has been edited by Wendy Flora (edited 01-29-2000).] |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
This, i have to say, is my favorite poem out of all that i have read on this forum. It makes you act out a part of the poem to "feel" the words. Very creative. Hats off to ya Wendy There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
wendy: it's creative, it's powerful, it's beautiful... it's POETRY!! *waa haa haa haa* it's late and i'm delirious, but i do know that i like your work... sincerely, jerome the boy with no feet A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
Thanks to you both. *grin* I don't really know where this one came from... No special story or anything... but such compliments from you two of all people are REALLY awesome! (It's like getting patted on the back by Shakespeare or Yeats...  ) -wen |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hey Wen, good to see you here ! You actually had me here sitting behind my computer saying "desire" ! LOL Way to go girl !  |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
Ha! I love it! -wen"I am everything you want I am everything you need. I am everything inside of you That you wish you could be I say all the right things At exactly the right time But I mean nothing to you And I don't know why." -"Everything You Want" Vertical Horizon |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
wendy: *waa haa haa haa* me shakespeare? or yeats? i think not... but i'm glad you appreciate my comments... if you were to compare me to a poet, i think the best approximation in depth of idea might be Ogden Nash, and the most similar in style might be kurt cobain *heh*... i'm nothing special in the world of poetry... you, however, show a lot of promise and i hope that you keep writing  sincerely, jerome the boy with the sinus headache A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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Wendy Flora Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 182Virginia |
you sell yourself short. i love your stuff! -wen |
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