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summer Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80long beach .ca.usa |
My head is pounding..There is no space for me to think anymore.You have cosumed my mind completely. Why do I welcome this pain ? So many parts of me throbing now. There is no pill of cure for what I have , for I am in love in the worst way. The only peace I have now is when I am asleep and that is only when I am in your arms.. Thoughts of our past I wake up to never wanting to go back. I sit in the present meditating on the last time you touched me and dream of our future..I have even seen us dancing in heaven.. To live inside of you may be my only hope.. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
This is not my taste normally but the last line caught my eye "To live inside of you may be my only hope" Now that I have felt before. I was with someone and cared for them so much that I could not get close enough to them ....I think you know what I meant! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"..for I am in love in the worst way"... Summer, I love this poem...you have captured the desperation that sometimes comes with falling intensly in love with someone. Very nice piece of work. Janet Marie ..."She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it." Matchbox20 |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Agreeing with both of them vigorously. Love the last line. Jannel |
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