Dark Poetry #1 |
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Bottom of a glass |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio ![]() |
hi yall, well since i got a request for this one i will post it. this is the poem that i wrote about my last girl friend. i met her in a chat room and we went out for 4 months. i was suppose to meet her in the chat room on my birthday, but she never showed. and i havent heard from her since. i've e-mailed her and wrote her and i have gottenn nothing. my heart is still broke from that. well i have talked long enough. here is the poem. i hope yall like it. tell me what ya think. thanksBottom of a Glass As I sit alone Thinking of the past I try to drown my sorrows In the bottom of a glass I think about the way Things used to be Hoping that there can be another us Insted of just you and me I think of all the love And happieness that we shared I think back to the times When we didn't have a care But without you in my life I am just an empty shell No heart, no soul Just trapped inside this cell I wish that I Could hold you near And whisper sweet nothings Into your ear But alas our love Has ceased to be I still love you But you don't love me When I first met you You changed my life But now tears roll down my face Cutting my soul like a knife I hoped and prayed That I'd never see this day Why god why Did it have to end this way Even though we're no longer together We'll never be far apart Because on that day you left me with you, you took my heart... Jesse C. Jaymz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Jesse, this is a very special poem, while its sadness pulls at the heart, it also allows us to heal to be able to put these emtions into verse. Thank you for sharing this, I hope you find healing in this time. Take care, Janet Marie |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jesse such pain. It is so hard when they simply refuse to correspond to you at all. You wonder what you did or didn't do etc. I know it has happened to me right here in Passions a couple of times. (HUGS) of understanding. The hurt lessens I promise ![]() Glad you shared it with us too btw.. Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
thank you guys so much. alot of people see my poetry and back away. but yall have welcomed me like family. thank you. i know in time that my heart will heel. but there will always be that black scar oon my heart that will forever remain. ![]() True beauty is often hidden in darkness... ~Jesse C. Jaymz~ |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Jesse this was supurb!!!! this is the worst feeling in the world to have, I can relate. I'm glad you posted this !!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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