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Malice for my ugly sin
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Malice for my ugly sin |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
Don't know what came over me. This is definately raw material. probably a few misspelled words/typos here and there. Just wrote this off of the top of my head. Story of a man who had a one night stand and then was worried if his wife would find out someway,somehow. ++++++++++ Fantasizing Beautiful breasts Dreaming Beautiful legs Yurning Beautiful thighs Desiring Beautiful juices Expressing Beautiful voice Commenting Beautiful lips Asking Beautiful answer... Hoping Tempting clothes Praying Tempting smell Shivering Tempting tongue Quivering Tempting eyes... Exhillerating Tasty lips Moaning Tasty thighs Groaning Tasty insides... Then it was morning.... Regreting Ugly morning Hating Ugly self Despising Ugly decision Malice for my ugly sin... Worrying Beautiful son Worrying Tempting eternity Worrying Tasty life Worrying Ugly regression Worrying Faithful wife. < !signature--> There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner [This message has been edited by ChainedAngel (edited 01-22-2000).] |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Don't worry, I'm no critic, but I like this one very much. It sounds like you might have some expierance in this area...interesting. Good work, keep it up. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
The thoughts of guilt can be overwhelming... I hope not yours in this one.. I did like it though! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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ChainedAngel Member
since 2000-01-07
Posts 55tx |
GA: I've had no experience in this subject. Like i said, i dont know what came over me. I'm not married, yet. Bojopy: Guilt can cause sorrow, pain, even death. Guess this poem kind of reminds me of the scarlet letter, in a way. There is a dream inside a dream. I'm wide awake the more I sleep. You'll understand when I'm dead - B. Warner |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Perhaps bad thoughts on a possible future. You are the driver of your destiny and/or future, you keep your eyes on the road and your life won't be like this. It sounds like it was almost a dream? I liked it though, sometimes as a wife and mother you DO feel somewhat smothered by the responsibilities, I know  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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