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Dark Poetry #1

One Moment

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-01-20 04:08 PM

Knowing how easily I could love you
Scares me

With one moment
Could cause me to love you

Forever

One time
That is all I need

But can a handle
That one moment

Then could I ever live without it

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-01-20 06:48 PM

Beautifully written and can you handle not living in the moment. Sometimes fear is good if it keeps us from making wrong decisions. Otherwise do not let fear keep you from enjoying the moment for life is this very moment. James

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 2000-01-21 01:42 AM

i am in complete agreement with james. i couldn;t have said it any better, so i won't try. nice piece!

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-22 01:47 AM

I agree with james too.... One moment just perfect.... Also the length for this was excellent because a moment is short and it could be missed.. I revel in moments because you never know when the next one will be... Anyway nicely done!!

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

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