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a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
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0 posted 2000-01-20 10:55 AM


COME TO ME.

"Come to me my chyld,"
the words I hear in a whispering voice.
Making my insides wild.
I long for your touch.
Fearing your power over me, much.
Needing your instructions
and exquisite perversions.
Place wilting flowers upon my lips
with your inverted crucifix.
My deamon,
come to me with your foul, unspeakable acts.
Teach me your knowledge and facts.
I have opened all to you, every lock...
teach me, my sweetest Memnoch.

These last two that I have posted were written last year. I hope that you enjoy them both.


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

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Vampire'sMistress
Junior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 19

1 posted 2000-01-20 11:30 AM


you should have posted them before!!!!!
I cant imagine that anyone wont accept this type of poetry.
....you know what? you are my motivation to write a really good vampire poem.

you like anne rice? (memnoch)

Carpe Noctem,

VM

a-alibaster
Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

2 posted 2000-01-20 02:50 PM


VM,
I do like anne rice....but I have only read Interview with a vampire and Pandora.
Although, I use "memnoch" as another way to say deamon or vampire...just my own invention there.
I am glad to be your motivation.
I have a story that is written as a poem about a vampire as well....as soon as I find it one my disks I will post it for you. I think you may like it.
Good Luck with your new poem and I can not wait to read it....


 There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-01-21 01:46 AM


good piece. and hey, this ain't called dark passions for nothing, of course poems such as these would be accepted here. adds to the flavor, you know? So keep posting and i'll keep reading.  
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-01-21 01:48 AM


Danni is right, this is perfect for the dark forum anything with vampyre's too.  Post away, we'll read 'em  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-22 01:53 AM


I love that word perversions.. This is well excepted by me.. Keep them coming especially in here!!

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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