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Tony
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5


0 posted 2000-01-20 04:25 AM


I thought I was your guardian angel,
My mission was to heal not hurt...

But, I have weaken you in the middle of the night and brought you to your knees in tears...

I know now that I am the wounded...almost dead
I am the one who is slipping into darkness...

So touch me now...
Change my life...
Help me to touch heaven...

For, I am an angel falling


© Copyright 2000 Tony - All Rights Reserved
summer
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa
1 posted 2000-01-20 04:36 AM


You will not fall far and long , for you are my angel and can not live without you...Tony this is beautiful
My tears fall easy,for our love means everything to me..Next time we will hold eacthother tight  instead of falling..I Love You

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2000-01-20 05:38 AM


HEEEYY! CUT THAT OUT!!     This place is supposed to be all dark, but look what sweetness this bring to it. Fine by me.   This place needs a little light once in a while!

 Don't gain my affections and cover my eyes. In blindness I will only swing harder.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-01-20 07:02 PM


Nicely written Tony and so glad you are an angel that has seen the lite and now knows the true nature of his mission.  James
JD
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
4 posted 2000-01-21 12:00 PM


Strage but i like it

JD



 Everything Dies



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